5-Minute Essay Clarity Pack

Use this pack to tighten thesis flow, evidence links, and conclusion clarity in essays.

Workflow (5 Minutes)

  1. Open each paragraph with a claim verb.
  2. Link evidence using precise connectors.
  3. Close with implication, not repetition.

Core Word Set

Weak to Strong Rewrites

Before

This shows the policy is bad.

After

Attendance data indicates the policy disproportionately harms first-generation students.

Before

People might disagree but we are right.

After

Although critics cite cost, longitudinal data supports the intervention’s effectiveness.

Before

In conclusion, this is important.

After

In sum, the evidence supports adoption under the current implementation constraints.